Discussion: Show and Tell Haiku

So I have moved on from writing the life poetic.  But I still turn to it from time to time.  This time it’s about showing and not telling.  The exercise asks to take several lines that “tell” the reader something and turn them into sentences that “show” the reader something.  There were eight sentences and I thought I’d respond with a haiku show.  Enjoy.

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